I Still Remember Poem by Vanessa Cortes

I Still Remember

Rating: 5.0


I still remember those late night calls
how you were there to catch me from all my falls
you always knew just what to do to cheer me up
all you had to do was tell me 'sup'
i don't know were we went wrong
we were oh so strong
i still remember the things we would do
how i had your back and you had mine 2
yeah we had our ups and our downs
but with you i had no frowns
sometimes i look back on the times we had
and i think to myself oh well it's to bad
when my friends talk about you
all i do is smile
and act like I'm over it
like I'm over us
but the truth is
I'm not
i still miss you
i thought we were going to get through it
but i guess neither of us made an effort
and you know the saying
'you never know what you have until it's all gone'
i didn't believe it until i lost you
i now know you truly are special
and now i wish i could go back
but it's to late
you've moved on
but i want you to know
i still love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 15 August 2009

Very well expressed emotion. Love seems sweeter when not fruitful. Nice poem.

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Unknown Noneofurs 15 August 2009

This poem is really good Really caught my attention I can really relate to it I can tell a lot about you from this poem Keep it up very good poem 10 + + +

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Danny H 15 August 2009

Sounds like a wonderful friend. Good luck to the best of you, keep your mind clear and keep beleiving and seeing things clearly.

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Romeo Della Valle 15 August 2009

Dear Vanessa, the transparency of your poem reveals the real you, with clarity and feelings deep from the heart...What more can I say at this point that I haven't said already? You got my 10+, hope you read some of my poems, I would appreciate it, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Vanessa Cortes

Vanessa Cortes

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