I Tease Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Tease

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Punish for what?
I have never fought
Over anything on any issue
It is your view

Of course I tease
And release
Some sentences
To make you little tense

It is part of friendship
As we are common persons on ship
That sails with lots of passengers
Some one is stranger and some one is lover too

Do not bear
And fear
For showing truth
As it needs no proof

I am no eve teaser
Or flirt mover
I am lone traveler
Always smile and offer

It is journey
That is already
Going short day by day
Making us ready for any other day

Saturday, August 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

Punish for what? I have never fought

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2014

Quite Interesting poem. Beautiful lines.... Of course I tease And release Some sentences To make you little tense.....Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

welcom Attia Saeed, Rohani Daud and Cheryl Serious Nwankwo like this. Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

It's ok Sarah Adams41 minutes ago Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

Life is a journey Patricia Calhoun-Porter39 minutes ago Maybe we'll get another day, but if not, make the best out of Today. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

welcome Edidiong Etukudoh Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

as expected, great lines. 2 Aug by jerry mozes to I tease

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

good work Judie Jackson37 minutes ago Love the flow and feel of this poet's work. He shows much depth and insight in construction and bringing the poem to its climax. Very good work! Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

good work gannicus Gallic40 minutes ago Great poem nice work can you read and review one of mine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2014

Meh Jakob Cordes38 minutes ago As I find so often with poetry posted to this site, far too often really, this is a basically good message, but it's obscured and tainted by confused structure and bad syntax. I get what the idea of the poem is, but the experience is ruined by my having to correct it in my mind to make it readable. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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