Friday, February 21, 2020

I, The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Around the corner and up into the air,
I pull myself upwards faster than climbing the stair.

Sometimes I blow gently, down the book, across the page,
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Alan Bruce Thompson
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2020

Faster than climbing the stair you pull air towards you and perceive the natural phenomenon. Rhyme added to verses gives a reader sweet sensation. Wind touches mind. An excellent poem is brilliantly penned...10

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Lodigiana Poetess 21 February 2020

A really delightful poem and a joy to read..lovely! Lodigiana

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Alan Bruce Thompson

Alan Bruce Thompson

Newcastle upon Tyne, United Kingdom
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