poet Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar

Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar

I Thought You Will Come...

I thought you will come
when i sink in the bath tub
bubbles around
vanishing one by one!

I thought you will come
when i am waiting for the moon
in the balcony
who hides behind the clouds
with his light spreading around phenominanly!

I thought you will come
when i cut that marvelous water-melon
near kitchin wall
when ray of hope lights in my soul!

I thought you will come
when those little hands shivers
with that ice cold fever
to give the warmth inside your heart
every thing need is your love in the start! !

I thought you will come at the End! !

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 1, 2016

Form: ABC


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  • Dutendra ChamlingDutendra Chamling (9/8/2016 3:59:00 AM)

    Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar! Beautiful poem, your feeling has got sufficient language in your poem. Thumbs up!

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  • Shabati Dokyu (9/3/2016 6:47:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, indeed. I hope you could write more poems. It seems really you have a talent for it.

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    Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar(9/5/2016 1:41:00 AM)

    Thank you Shabati Dokyu. Will write more poems for sure. :)

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  • Kelly KurtKelly Kurt (9/1/2016 11:49:00 AM)

    A beautiful and well written love poem, Lakshmi. Thank you for sharing

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    Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar(9/2/2016 1:56:00 AM)

    Thank you for supporting words, Kelly Kurt.

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