I Tried.. Poem by Joseph Cuevas

I Tried..

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I tried to tell her with her music turned up so loud,
That I saw an image of her face in every passing cloud.
I tried to tell her as the truck drove by,
That I couldn't help but always get lost in her eyes.
I tried to tell her as the passing train roared,
That she was a more important thing to me than a knight needs his sword.
I tried to tell her as she covered her ears,
That i have been in love with her for oh so many years.
I tried to tell her but would she ever hear,
For the thought of her actually hearing was my one and only utterless fear...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachael Curtis 22 February 2010

How beautiful! ! =) I love your examples! I know exactly what you mean, working up enough courage is so hard. You are very good at writing about human emotion, please don't stop!

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Twilight Whispers 02 February 2010

Again, amazing :) You're really goood at this!

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