Wednesday, September 6, 2006

I Walked Back To Look At The Moon Tonight Comments

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I walked back to look at the moon tonight
You see I walked past the moon
as I had
on many other nights,
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Gary Dobbs Morgan
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Job Ombati 21 December 2024

Quite an experience there! I love watching the moon. Good poem.

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Frances Anne Cutis 21 February 2008

Exactly! Beautiful, real and succinct. Keep writing!

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Joseph Daly 07 September 2006

I don't know if the spelling should be 'storey' in line five. If it is a mistake then be thankfull; leave it because it is a brilliant play on words. This is a wonderfully constructed piece and the imagery is excellent. It has a great flow that has no need for the use of interrupting stanzas.

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Gary Dobbs Morgan

Gary Dobbs Morgan

Royal Hospital, Bronx New York City
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