Wednesday, August 5, 2020

I Wander Between... Comments

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I wander between broken words and dreams
Like a jaded prophet. Now days are bleak
And nights have extinguished their gleaming stars.
Love, Faith and Mercy have fled far away
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Dominic Windram 07 August 2020

Thanks guys...much appreciated! TS Eliot ended up composing the spiritually enlightened Ah Wednesday and then the magnificent Four Quartets after the Wasteland...so sure there's always hope for we poets who work coninuously in the kingdom of the mind. Nevertheless, I will not surrender to blind faith: which I find incredibly demeaning and indeed counter productive.

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Shaun Cronick 05 August 2020

Despair indeed but with a question that hangs in there at the end, perhaps a little of light even hope? That's up to each reader to decide perhaps. Nicely written and presented Dominic. 10+ and hang in there.

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Michael Hopkins 05 August 2020

You are not the only wanderer. Yes, it is harder to connect to the infinite source of inspiration these days but not impossible. Another brilliant poem.

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