I Wanna Let You Go Back, Not Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

I Wanna Let You Go Back, Not

Rating: 5.0


I wanna let you
go back, Not
this time,
I swear.

Gone're the days
you came last time,
the tender breast
of autumn
bleeding shrunk die.

The steady flowing
spring in the rains
facing menopausal fate.

The barren mountain
harboring
the fetus of greenery
hard conceived
in the womb
is blastedly aborted
by the corporate bomb.

Bird at total eclipse
swirling reverse threatened
bump into
pole of uncertainty.

My motif was
never to
let you go back.

The butterfly
at teens
losing the wings
in a blatant blood shed
let you go back.

The lover at the
red corridor
longing for
virgin air
shot dead.


I wanna let you
go back, Not this time.

Gone are the days
you came last time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhakti Sharma 26 October 2018

The steady flowing spring in the rains facing menopausal fate.Good imagination.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 November 2017

beautiful ten points plus imagery lovely let NOT her now ever go good flow

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Binayakumar Mohanty 19 November 2017

Thanks for nice comments.

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Rajendra Rout 29 October 2017

The butterfly at teens losing the wings in a blatant blood shed let you go back.it was a very beauti ful poem.thanks for shairing

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Rajendra Rout 31 October 2017

thanku sir

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Binayakumar Mohanty 29 October 2017

Thanks for your love and kind comment for the poem.I loved it.Binaya

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 October 2017

Excellent..! Fascinating poetic imagination. I loved the way it is penned..!!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 29 October 2017

Thanks sir for your kind words of comments.Regards.

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