Kevin Eaglesfield

Rookie - 21 Points (19th April 1967 / Derby, England)

I Want - Poem by Kevin Eaglesfield

I want to hold your hand a bit,
And when you sit,
I want my arm around your shoulders.

I want to snuggle up when cold,
And not be told
Inside my head I'm rubbish.

I want to look at you all day,
And not the way
I do now sideways on the sly.

I want to tell and point and share
Because you're there
And want to have my sees and says.

I want to want to hurry home,
Attack the phone
In case your voice is on the end.

I want to wake up with the sun
And not the run
Of passing out and coming to.

I just want you.


Comments about I Want by Kevin Eaglesfield

  • Rachel Ann Butler (9/22/2009 6:28:00 PM)

    I want to look at you all day,


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  • Original Unknown Girl (10/9/2008 10:33:00 AM)

    Oh I love this poetic piece of imperatives! Isn't it just wonderful to feel this loved up and just 'want'? Brill! HG: -) xx (Report)Reply

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  • David ThreadgoldDavid Threadgold (10/7/2008 3:52:00 AM)

    Hi Kevin. Its always good to want and to let athers know they are the one that you want is even more important. well written. A good read. Regards Dave T 10/10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 7, 2008



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