I Want To Write A Poem Poem by Rosie H...

I Want To Write A Poem

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I want to write a poem so powerful,
So strong that it makes people feel they belong
I'll have the words to take away their pain
Take away their breath, leave them speechless
They'll read it again, and again, and again
I want to tie their stomach in knots.
Wrap them in a blanket of words.
My poem will tell of life, and death
Of memories made, so bright
They never will fade.
I'll make them feel as if they're being torn apart,
I'll transport them to another place where their worries float away
On the wings of birds and the only thing that can be heard
Is the whisper of the angels.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
First poem i've ever written :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 02 March 2013

It's very good - I love it! ! Keep on writing, you've got the feel for it. It does have power in the lines themselves - I can relate with what you've said.

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