Thursday, October 12, 2017
I Want You To Want Me Comments
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I want you to want me,
Want me so much it hurts,
And once you can't bear the burn,
Know that that is how much I love you.
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Emma Atkinson
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2/21/2026 10:02:02 PM # 1.0.0
Good work. 2nd stanza edited - I want you to desire me my feelings, my words until yours turn to knots because that's how I love you. (would you mind if I edit the entire poem?)
Ravi, I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read my work and offer advice; however, I wish to preserve the spirit and the exact feelings I felt when writing this, and as of now, I would't change anything about it. Though that may change in the future, I would rather if you left my poem as is. Again, thank you for your advice, and I will keep it in mind if I ever decide to edit.