I Was The One Poem by Mercedes Zoller

I Was The One

Rating: 5.0


I am the one who loved you
When you needed love
I am the one who hugged you

When you were hurting
And now that i need you
I can't find you
Maybe everything has changed
Maybe you've forgotten me
But i want you to remember
That you were always everything to me
I was the one
Who thought of you every moment
I was the one
Who watched you walk away
I can't understand why you left me
I can't understand why you hurt me
The pain doesn't matter
You are still my love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Thomas 16 February 2008

Wow, Mercedes - stunning in depth of feeling & strength of expression: not a spare word in the poem, yet so much left unsaid (rightly) . Thank you.

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Mercedes Zoller

Mercedes Zoller

Pittsburgh Pennsylvania
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