Monday, May 7, 2018

I Will Return Comments

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As I lay down onto the mat,
Already my anticipation is heightened,
I take a couple of long slow deep breaths,
Letting the air flow out slowly and methodically,
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Long Soft Kiss
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 November 2018

As the body is slowly released, And awakens to its senses, A calmness is felt within. The mind is somehow relieved, To have control of its body again..a very original way of relationship, love, desire, wishes, the first touch........thank u dear poet for these thoughts. thank u. tony

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Naila Rais 07 May 2018

A nice write.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila..

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, L. S. K. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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