Saturday, September 5, 2020

I Wish... Comments

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I wish to capture the flashing snowflakes of dreams
And the colours and notions of oceans and seas.
O I seek the haunting mysteries of trees,
As they whisper secrets in forests of deep green!
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Shaun Cronick 14 September 2020

If one is going to maker a wish, wish big and artistic. And aim high for what is there to lose, but everything to gain. A fine rhyming scheme poem filled with ethereal imagery Dominic and a full score. And do wishes only come true if you're kid and truly believe. Thanks for sharing Dominic and take care.

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