I Wish Poem by saeed Karimiabdolrezaee

I Wish

Rating: 5.0


I wish I was a painter
I draw a portrait of you
And using the colors that you liked
Like Davinci draw your smile
Then your smile stay forever
I wish I was a musician
Then I make a melody
The melody of your sound
The sound still is in my ears
Or like Beethoven
I made a(Moonlight)sonnet for you
Then I went through to the notes
Heard my tears sound
Or like African Americans
All the pains
All the screams
Went through to the song
To the blouse and Jazz
To the Rap and Hip pop
Is very hard to write a poem
Is hard to send your tears to words
Is Hard to scream.

Saturday, April 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: sonnet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manpreet Singh 20 April 2019

Poetic licence is not something to toy with. Its a responsibility to carry. Nice theme and thoughts but you can work on your lines and diction.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Saeed Karim. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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