I Wish, I Could Fly Poem by Sweta Leena Panda

I Wish, I Could Fly



My mood again swings
with a wish that if I had wings
I wish I would fly
in the high and high sky
Happy and free in the clouds
Where joy knew no bounds
And make my heart feel happy and gay again
However in my head now I hear a sound
Its time to come out of the dream
That now I'm back into reality
With no clouds around and no wings
Come to this world where you present
Where you come with a little dream
A dream for others
A dream which can make smile many of us
A dream which you have to fulfill
As for humanity
However sometimes I want to free from my life
I wish to joy with myself alone
Where no one can reach
Peace, soundless world are there
I wish I had wings and I could fly
To reach at the upper high

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) it seems obvious that English is not your 'first language'. i shall not offer advice now, being quite busy with other things, but feel free to ask me questions. only one suggestion now: (from your 'bio') MY BELIEVES... i'd use MY BELIEFS. what is your 'first language'? i'll put this in my November showcase on PH, featuring poems by poets of the Indian subcontinent. Thanks. ;) p.s. one more 'suggestion': take the comma out of the title

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

i read your PH bio. nice. i doubt that your PH picture is a photo, but it is cute. i enjoyed this poem & send to MyPoemList. often i give suggestions on how to 'improve' one's English; even MINE could be improved! (cont.)

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