I Wish I Said That Earlier Poem by zaynab el zein

I Wish I Said That Earlier

Rating: 4.1


I am frozen I barely breathe
I miss you
I just can't stand living without you
You're all I ever want in my live
I really need you

The angel will be waiting forever
Forgetting you will be never
My heart has only beat for you
I lied when I said never

How can you do this to me
Leaving me like I don't care
You went to the only place
That I just can't reach you

The angel will be waiting for ever
Forgetting you will be never
I wish I say it before is too late
I love you

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I miss you..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Issam Hal 03 July 2010

tnx for ur nice feelings and for this beautiful words that really shows big emotions, wide imagination and a lovely heart

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Sunny Emo Girl 04 July 2010

oh that's so better one oh my feeling

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Mohammed Hassan 13 July 2010

perfect zaynab i like that poem, there's much love and longing for your beloved you deserve 10, keep it up

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James Jordan 12 July 2010

It holds some warmth behind those words, kinda reminds me of a past love...

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A wonderful heart you have! So enjoyed your poem; D

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Zaynab Elzain 05 July 2010

will it is a song so no big deal, and thnx for reading it

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Hrayr Tchanan 05 July 2010

there's something interesting in this one, it is written like it is some kind of a song. We can even hear the tune. Nice job. Just pay attention to the repetitions, I know you are doing it on purpose but you have to find another way to repeat your ideas and just by rewriting the same lines

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