I Have Something To Say Poem by zaynab el zein

I Have Something To Say

Rating: 4.4


I have something to say
There is no other way
So I’m going to say it Here and today

You’re the best man I know
But I’m so sorry I got to go
I’m leaving yea living
I really want to be free
Even if that mean that you can’t be next to me

You know I love you
And I’ll always do
But I got life and dreams too
Dreams that I have to make it truth

So I don’t care
If I have to hurt you
Destroy everything around you
Step on my love
Step on my feelings
Step on my heart
To reach my dreams

I know that’s going to be hard for sure
And it hurt me even more
But I have to go
I have to try
I all ready answer on the question why
So take a breath
Have a sight
And promise that you’ll never cry
I’m going to live so high

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Issam Hal 03 July 2010

do u know this poem is very very beautiful even i beleive that maybe with ur love u can reach what u dream and what u seek

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Hrayr Tchanan 05 July 2010

in order to make your poem long, you keep repeating the same ideas, the same feelings.It's a bad thing. You have to understand that a poem has nothing to do with how long or how less you write. A poem has to express powerful feelings, contain hidden messages that ordinary people are not able to think those by themselves. I believe you have the potential to do so. You just need practice :)

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Kolawole Ajao 07 July 2010

Want to stop dating? Well, that's good for what you claim the reason is-to pursue your dream uninterrupted. Nice one. As you write more you know more and develop more. You have the potential to be a great poet. Don't renege on your effort.

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Chulsoo Kim 09 July 2010

To be where you are here is utmost one among your way of life. To go inner and forward, you've got to retrospect the way you went on.

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Sunny Emo Girl 13 July 2010

will when i'm ganna love some one...i'm ganna change him i don't wanna like him so much so i can always make a decision like this

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max pike 13 July 2010

i fink you should do watcha have to do if someone really love you then would be wish you happy and surpport you forever....

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James Jordan 12 July 2010

It's a very light poem, but with a deep plea... I love how the story of the poem builds up...

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Unwritten Soul 11 July 2010

That was truly express from your heart, if ur lover really love u then he will understand and support u..but it doesnt mean u should have to end...if there is no more understanding of him to u so u make a good choice..but one u make a choice it is hard to turn back..so keep on the road and never regret!

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Well expressed., full of emotion. Rigourous write! ; D

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