Friday, June 12, 2015

I Wish I Want I Need Comments

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The black kitten cries at her bowl
meek meek and the gray one glowers
from the windowsill. My hand on the can
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 June 2015

I like this merging of cats n mothers which makes this so unique and mind blowing. The descriptions rendered in a very interesting engaging way that I was hooked from top to end. I could relate to both implacable cats and mothers ah. Kudos for the literary effects in this awesome freeverse poem. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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