I Wonder Poem by Lore Me34

I Wonder

Rating: 5.0


I wonder what it be like to hold your hand
I wonder what it be like to make you laugh
I wonder what it be like to get lost in your eyes
I wonder what it be like to kiss your lips,
to feel your embrace, to lay in your arms
at night and listen to your heart as you slept.
I would say I wonder what it be like to love you
but I already know because I do.
Do you know I wonder?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Leclerc 01 May 2006

I love the forthright tone of love and longing in this poem.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 30 April 2006

I read this poem several times. I was about to send you 'correctness' on language use. AND then I got caught up in the repetitiveness of...'I wonder what it be like...? ' I think you have written something that is very 'current' in terms of being 'real' with what's felt oppose to delivering what's expected. This is a very good poem. Congratulations. L

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