Lore Me34

Veteran Poet - 1,062 Points (March 10,1967 / Chicago, IL. USA)

I Wonder - Poem by Lore Me34

I wonder what it be like to hold your hand
I wonder what it be like to make you laugh
I wonder what it be like to get lost in your eyes
I wonder what it be like to kiss your lips,
to feel your embrace, to lay in your arms
at night and listen to your heart as you slept.
I would say I wonder what it be like to love you
but I already know because I do.
Do you know I wonder?


Comments about I Wonder by Lore Me34

  • (5/1/2006 9:00:00 AM)


    I love the forthright tone of love and longing in this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/30/2006 9:31:00 PM)


    I read this poem several times. I was about to send you 'correctness' on language use. AND then I got caught up in the repetitiveness of...'I wonder what it be like...? ' I think you have written something that is very 'current' in terms of being 'real' with what's felt oppose to delivering what's expected. This is a very good poem. Congratulations.
    L
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 30, 2006



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