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Very nicely composed and it has all the sweetness of a song...........profound

wow wat a romantic poem....loved it.........loved the lines see once your parted lip to make you girl all of mine- sink into your eyes deep I think she had some obligations at her end due to which she was hiding her face for too long and hence avoided the parting of lips: -)

Denied me that one happiness, till I broke into a song. It takes a lot to write that Chattopadhyay, loved it.