Icecube Swan Poem by doug bentley

Icecube Swan

Rating: 5.0


plop!
one cube of ice
SPLASH
FIZZZzzzz

lilac seed haze
bumblebee wing champagne
bubbles

unlocked, a swan swims
'neath, seas of glass.

one swan swoon, one
snapshot of ice that's glass

bubbles, bumblebees
swimming in lilac seas

Icecube Swan
Sunday, June 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: swan,zen
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The map shows that The Icecube Swan swims in a glass pond near the Antarctic coastline by the Prince Charles Mountains region.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 03 July 2020

Wonderful poem, beautiful alliteration, so nice to read the poem time and again

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 June 2020

swan swims in crystalline sea of life!

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Rajendran muthiah 29 June 2020

What a use of onamatopoic words A few poets can do it.

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doug bentley

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Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
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