Sunday, July 19, 2009

If Ever.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

If ever beauty
Could be described
In more than words,
In more than feelings and emotions,
...
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Brian Kamara
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Marieta Maglas 19 July 2009

nice combination between anaphora ans similes...well written poem..10++

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Ian Bowen 19 July 2009

Brian, lots to like in your poem. Will done. Ian

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Shweta Advani 19 July 2009

Ur poem just brought a smile on my face....beautifully expressed....must be alucky girl for whom u have written it...keep posting: ...u write well: -)

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Bhavika Sicka 19 July 2009

Beautifully written.

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