If I Could Pray Poem by Barry Middleton

If I Could Pray

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If I could pray, then I would pray for strength,
the strength of courage in the face of fear,
for in a dream I saw a dreadful sight,
as it was I laid there upon the bier.

A night of fog had settled on the view,
obscuring all I ever thought I knew,
and there was only silence in that place,
the spirit fled with not a single trace.

And no attendant ghosts had come to grieve,
within a barren forest stripped and bleak,
and not a breath of wind disturbed the trees,
but all was cloaked within a strange mystique.

The dream subsided as the darkness fell,
beyond the mist of dim and dreadful night,
and only then did I perceive a sound,
where tolling bells proclaimed the final rite.

If I Could Pray
Friday, May 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,fear,prayer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 12 May 2017

The narrative is perplexing Nightmares may not be real life incidents but they leave a big impact on a person's psyche. This poem brings to fore a very nerve racking experience which the poet has had. The experience deftly presented in the poem. Thanks.

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Barry Middleton 12 May 2017

More of a waking nightmare. Thanks for the comment.

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