If I Told You Poem by Holly Smith

If I Told You

Rating: 5.0


If i told you that I'd listen,
If i told you that I'd care,
Would you open up your heart to me?
and show me all that's there?

If i tolf you that i missed you,
would you completely understand?
That when i am not with you,
It's like you're in another land?

If i told you that i loved you,
would you simply sit and stare?
or hold me so very closely,
and make love seem fair?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vikky Lai 29 September 2009

Holly, that's an amazing poem! It's really simple yet effective. Go for it; -) xx

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Roshni D'Souza 25 April 2009

Really great flow of thoughts...simple, but so poignant! You certainly have a way with words, my dear! Don't stop writing!

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Reece Lyle 10 April 2009

love this one as well holly you really do have a talent for this: -)

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