I just want to hate you,
I just want to scream,
or maybe i could just wake up,
and this could all be a dream.
I want this to be over,
why's it happening to me?
you're not who i thought you were,
you're not who i see.
Whenever i'm near you,
I can't help but think
Why did you do this?
You made my heart sink
Yet i cannot leave you,
Hate being on my own,
but the backstabbers showed me,
i'm truly alone.
wow a very intresing of rhythm in your free will i love it hunny..10++ xxx
You have a nice, crisp sense of rhythm which you have used well in this poem. Very enjoyable. Irene
lol im guessing this about... never mind i love it holly :) keep it up x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Another great and effective poem. And i think i can tell erm...yeah; -) xx