If Only You Knew Poem by brandon febles

If Only You Knew

Rating: 5.0


You are my everything, my one and only

With out you, I just feel so lonely

What I felt at first was just friends,

Now its Something more

You are something special,

Deserved to be adored.

Fate has brought us together,

You are the perfect one for me

Everything I wanted

Exactly what I need

not being with you I'm falling apart

cause I don't know how to get your heart

If you look at me, you'll understand,

All I want is to hold your hand.

I smile and laugh just thinking of you,

Together here, I wish it were true.

I lay awake at night and wondering why you are not

Here with me

You are the first thing that I think about when I wake in

The morning

How long the wait, I do not know...

But when the day comes, I'll let it show.

If only you knew my feelings for you,

I'll stay hopeful that you'll feel the same way, too

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracey Wynn 24 October 2009

Good piece. This is a poem that people can relate to and understand because they have been in the same position or something similar to it. I give you a 10 for this.

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Serenity Prayer 24 December 2008

i can relate. great job. keep up the good work.

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Joseph Poewhit 15 December 2008

Poem has a lot of deep seated emotions

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