Friday, December 22, 2006

If You Don’t Find Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

In this city, you can die
In a lonely drive-by,
Blood oozing from your chest
In the dirty street
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ebone' Ingram 25 December 2006

a sad view on life that has an optimistic undertone...i like it luv ya, eni da kid

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Sandra Fowler 23 December 2006

Stark, genuine, and very powerful. The street and its sad people may not survive, but your poetry will, Uriah. Take care. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 23 December 2006

A poem of angst and melancholy that has fierce determination and hope. A beautiful poem Uriah. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 22 December 2006

I absolutely love the poem

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