Tuesday, July 26, 2005

If You Lift Your Skirt Comments

Rating: 4.3

Reality today is a sunless chasm
Impossible to climb,
A smooth wall smeared with grease,
A punishment from trickster gods
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Uriah Hamilton
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John Tiong Chunghoo 02 August 2005

Dear uriah, such evocative poem.

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'But if you lift your skirt, I’ll...make things fit, ' this is cleverly lascivious without being lewd, almost Prince-like in its delivery. excellent work! Jake

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