If You Love Me Poem by Sahar Sahar

If You Love Me

Rating: 5.0


If you love me,
Come to my world,
and see your beloved,
with eyes of springs,
and hold me in your arms,
Like bunch of roses,

If you remember me,
Then be sure,
you will forget every sadness,
and keep me in your mind,
all the times.

If you forget me,
You must know,
that my soul wanders around you,
and i am lost,
always in your loves,

If you trust me,
Then be sure,
my blood and my soul,
Is for you,
and my love is eternal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 October 2009

Nice love poem… Poet found LOVE No IF! From me. Ten Ms. Nivedita UK Please read my Poems: Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] Enigmatic Navel or others. niv

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Akram Awadat 22 October 2009

that's great, you make me feel what you write 10

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Ershad Mazumder 10 October 2009

I am in love with my fiance for decades. But I am yet to me her. But I am sure one day I shall meet here or there. Great job dear Sahar.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2009

If you love me, Come to my world, and see your beloved, with eyes of springs, and hold me in your arms, Like bunch of roses, ..if i have choice i may opt for it as any body else go for it as words lack no sincerity and purity too... lovley poem and i liked it most.. it is best of its test......10 read mine dilemma..it makes me to bleed...same coin

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Afzal Shauq 30 September 2009

If you remember me, Then be sure, you will forget every sadness, and keep me in your mind, all the times. what is good in your poetry is to raise wousetions indirect way and leave the readers to reply by thier own..its a goo dpoem done in ormantic way and the composition of words are perfectly done and idea is meaningful and rich inddeed..10/10

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