You dumped me,
in soil of miseries,
I proliferated to green,
look back at me,
I am grown-up tall,
I am umbrella to kids,
i am home for birds,
i am feeding hundreds,
with my sweet fruits,
will you like,
To be under,
my shades,
when you are nomore stronger,
with osteoprotic bones,
weak and frail,
rejected and miserable,
I will be generous to protect you,
I will not dump you 5 feet deep,
as you dumped me.
for no reason,
When i needed you,
For some reason.
When i needed you, For some reason. a very cryptic ending! ! Good work Beta
I will be generous to protect you, I will not dump you 5 feet deep, as you dumped me. for no reason, When i needed you, For some reason. fighting spirit in your poem. Good rythem throughout.
a heartfelt poem! you're Generous Sahar! the failure makes you strong. the pain makes you wise. nice nice!
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I am grown-up tall, I am umbrella to kids, i am home for birds, i am feeding hundreds, with my sweet fruits, wow what asymbolic way written this poem is...romantic, reality based expressions, positive thinking makes your message very rich and heart catcy one..Your style is very much poetic and I feel a story behind this theme..a lovely written poem..well done sahar..10/10