Thursday, September 4, 2014

Ifs And Buts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shreds us the life
With bruises and cuts
Our days run rife
In the ifs and buts!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Lorraine Colon 04 September 2014

So much truth and feeling in this poem. I guess ifs and buts are just excuses - or maybe explanations we can accept when things don't go smoothly for us. Can we live without ifs and buts? Great job on this poem!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 September 2014

Yes life embroiled in ifs and buts sometimes...........very well composed sir

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