Friday, September 13, 2013

Illusion Comments

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It's stormy outside, and windy, and gloom,
And I'm craving to stealthily be kissed
While candles are scenting the air in the room
Of white roses and blue ocean mist.
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2019

Outside! Facing the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Alina Kprice 13 September 2013

I was a little unsure before post it, as it is only my second poem in English, so thank you so much for your encouragement. I'm glad it's not that bad.: D

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Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2013

'My dream is glowing with glimpses of love Who will endlessly spark all that's sparkless.' A beautiful expression! And a magnificent title too!

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Alina Kprice 13 September 2013

Thank you for taking the time to read it and your positive feedback.

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