megan watts

Rookie (14/4/92 / basildon (england))

Im In Love With You - Poem by megan watts

im in love with you cant you see
but i know that we will never be
i just keep up hopes, hoping that one day
id have you and my life would stop being grey
each day i see you and her
i cant help but stop and stare
take my pain as a token
for my heart is eternity broken
these words which i speak, i love you
are words from me that are true

Comments about Im In Love With You by megan watts

  • (5/16/2005 6:01:00 PM)

    Megan, this reads just like many many many other poems on the subject of romantic heartache, which is definitely the most popular topic for amateur poems. I don't know why people keep posting what are essentially journal entries. It takes much more than emotion to right a good poem. Sorry. Try reading a a lot of poetry by recognized poets. That may help your own poetry. Regards. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 16, 2005

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