Saturday, January 14, 2012

Im Just A Shy Girl. Comments

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I'm just a shy girl.
Living in this big city.
I want to take risk and thrills.
Through this adventurous world.
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Rajendran Muthiah 14 January 2012

Oh, my shy daughter wants to flight her wings! What holds you back is for your good. You can make adventures in good things without telling lies. Desire to take part in fun should not sink you into the mire. Frank expression of a dilemma in brief lines makes a beautiful poem.

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Wahab Abdul 14 January 2012

brief autobiography of a shy girls...very good poem..i like it...though a little sad but very strong and enjoyable.....keep writing..please read my poems

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