I'm Ok. Poem by Tor Magnor Solvang

I'm Ok.

Rating: 5.0

'I'm okay, ' she said, her voice a little thin.
The sun was bright, a happy, golden grin.
But shadows stretched, long fingers on the floor,
And dust motes danced where joy had been before.

'I'm okay, ' she smiled, a flicker in her eye.
The birds were singing, chirping in the sky.
But a single feather, broken, lay so still,
And the wind whispered secrets on the hill.

'I'm okay, ' she sighed, a breath she tried to keep.
The world was quiet, secrets buried deep.
But a wilting flower drooped its weary head,
And empty spaces echoed what was left unsaid.

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Bharati Nayak 25 May 2026

Let me quote from this lovely poem, ''I'm okay, ' she sighed, a breath she tried to keep. The world was quiet, secrets buried deep. But a wilting flower drooped its weary head, And empty spaces echoed what was left unsaid.'

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Bharati Nayak 25 May 2026

We hide many pains inside our hearts and only show our strength.

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