Immortally Poem by Keith Parsons

Immortally

Rating: 5.0


In this life like all the rest
I’ll learn my lessons well
By suffering or dominate
Personality

Lately as I age some more
It occurs to me
The aches and pains that I incur,
Temporarily

I climbed into this body
When still a womb I see
A vessel for the life I lead
So imperfectly

Last, I have lived a lifetime
My spirit soon is free
It’s time to move on to the next
I, immortally

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yelena M. 09 June 2009

An inspiring poetic creation..I really like phraseology and the way you express deeply felt emotions in few words.10+ Thanks for sharing and best wishes. A.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 May 2009

the very philosophy of reincarnation as soul sways by immortality in ages and eons, wroght ingenious by imagery,10+, thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2009

The perfect philosophy of body life soul mortality and immortalty...you have beautifully conveyed your good concept on a theme noble...congrats...Keith...10

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