Impaired Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Impaired

Rating: 5.0


You cloud my vision,
And gauge out my eyes.
I cannot see the stars
When you stand so close
To me and the ocean,
Because we all blend
Together and become one.
This is not me, you are not
Less than this blistering sea.
It is soon forgotten, again I am
Lost here, gazing at you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 15 September 2011

Wonderful..love sometimes impairing our senses to blend us as one... Good poetry

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Allemagne Roßmann 14 September 2011

Synchronised and served the poetic sinews.....

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Fool Of Forgiveness 13 September 2011

that is what i'm talking about! ! ! >.< this is gold! ! ! love it love it love it! ! !

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