Improvement Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Improvement



Improvement

Who will think of betterment?
Self, people or opponent
One must lend ears for improvement
And tackle solution at present

We can't take advice
And surmise
For personal benefit
Where feel fit

Take not it assign person
As it may be marred by many reasons
But ultimately it is counseling
And ideas for self selling

Criticism is nice
But what surprises?
If it is not aimed at an improvement
But works as an impediment

So steer out
From fall and talk about
How best you can achieve?
And improve

Improvement
Monday, February 29, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 February 2016

Nice write. Tfs 45 minutes ago by Kara Jean | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 February 2016

So steer out From fall and talk about How best you can achieve? And improve

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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