Thursday, September 4, 2008

Impugned Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beloved imprudent
Tarnished by the parting lullaby
Ever faded, destroyed
In the sanctity
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Moushumi moushumi
COMMENTS
Sarwar Chowdhury 04 September 2008

a 10 for this touchy composition! If not loyal- Love get an ebb-tide! Falsity hurts both facing tragic end!

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Kesav Easwaran 04 September 2008

Slaughtered horse Impaled on the stile! I liked the pathetic mockery reflecting in the line...good serious write...10

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Joseph Poewhit 04 September 2008

Poem comes across with a wildness

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