kite remedy

Rookie - 0 Points (30 - 04 - 1989 / Kediri)

In A Nest - Poem by kite remedy

One day when I flew
for skies so new,
I left my home with no clue..

So world was way tough,
out of my thought.
I did think that I have lost..

I strayed by the wind
to an unknown place,
and rested my wings for a while..

The song of a child
beneath this tree,
was lulling me to my sleep..

And then,
could I understand,
why there's a place that is called 'home'.
So when you think that you're none,
you would surely
have a place
to be...

So please Tomorrow,
don't walk so slow.
I've been waiting for you to come..

I knew I had left,
on a branch, in a nest,
a bit of my,
my happiness..


Comments about In A Nest by kite remedy

  • (12/3/2008 10:17:00 PM)

    Yes- home is a temple! Good wreite! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/30/2008 6:33:00 AM)

    Like a kite flying from tresure chest
    i flew to found my mate
    my heart's guest
    I found him
    My souls floats in a sea of rest
    Good work.
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  • (11/28/2008 11:14:00 AM)

    To venture off from the safety of what you have known as home is scary..but exciting..home is the beginning of your happiness. Enjoyed the reading and understanding the new adventure out of the safety of the nest into a bright big world- the comfort of your home is never too far away. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/28/2008 3:40:00 AM)

    its very beautiful and inspirig write with very strong use of metaphors and message, true so true their's no place as beautiful and peaceful as like home...thanks for sharing 10++++ for this marvellous write...

    rgds
    asif
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  • (11/27/2008 11:45:00 PM)

    I love this its very different i love how you expressed happiness with a branch and a nest.. Great imagination


    Krista
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, December 1, 2008


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