! ! Lord, Tell Me If I Would Die In Any Minute Now! ! ! Poem by kite remedy

! ! Lord, Tell Me If I Would Die In Any Minute Now! ! !

Rating: 2.9


He's alone
singing a song
so sad
he's cursing like mad
he can't stand it
he can't wait
for any answer
for any reply
ignorant world
negligent world
'curse you,
screw you! ! '
he screams
he grins
'I'm on my own,
on my own! ! '
'I don't need no answer,
I'm fine myself! ! '
he smiles
he laughs
he falls
fate befalls
so wrong on him
that now he rests so peace
so serene
as if time freezes
keeps him in his smile
in his smile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jathin Aka Jesuzz 31 January 2009

wat shall i say.....im a fan...lovely potrayal of emotional rigidities

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emotionally piece, where the heart bleeds ink onto the page.10

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emotionally piece, where the heart bleeds ink onto the page.10

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