Tuesday, September 13, 2005

In A World Of Beautiful Women Comments

Rating: 4.6

We were both sitting
In a little non-descript bar
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Uriah Hamilton
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Enemacles Redux 20 September 2005

Awesome, man! Simlple, clear.. just spot on..

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Allan James Saywell 13 September 2005

a very good piece of word art uriah i enjoyed this very much i have done the same thing on jumping sheep, but with a different angle Warm Regards AJS

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this is very nice, Mr. Hamilton! I am inspired to write one called In a World of Beautiful Men...I'll get back to you on that one.

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Adriana Cruz 13 September 2005

as usual, great imagery. im always awed by how awesomely you write. :)

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Michael Philips 13 September 2005

Yes, this is a very good one, Uriah. I too like the same image that Raynette cited. I'm a bit troubled by the quote at the end. Why quote something that is really quite plain? You are talented enough to come up with better words to say the same thing.

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Raynette Eitel 13 September 2005

This rings true, Uriah. I like it...especially the image of loneliness hanging in the air like cigarette smoke. Good job. Raynette

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 13 September 2005

very nice write... think I was at that same bar yesterday with my girlfriends and some wine... -Eila

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 13 September 2005

I think everyone has felt that way on some level....nicely written.

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