We were both sitting
In a little non-descript bar
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a very good piece of word art uriah i enjoyed this very much i have done the same thing on jumping sheep, but with a different angle Warm Regards AJS
this is very nice, Mr. Hamilton! I am inspired to write one called In a World of Beautiful Men...I'll get back to you on that one.
as usual, great imagery. im always awed by how awesomely you write. :)
Yes, this is a very good one, Uriah. I too like the same image that Raynette cited. I'm a bit troubled by the quote at the end. Why quote something that is really quite plain? You are talented enough to come up with better words to say the same thing.
This rings true, Uriah. I like it...especially the image of loneliness hanging in the air like cigarette smoke. Good job. Raynette
very nice write... think I was at that same bar yesterday with my girlfriends and some wine... -Eila
I think everyone has felt that way on some level....nicely written.
Awesome, man! Simlple, clear.. just spot on..