In An Empty Sky Poem by john wake

In An Empty Sky



In an empty sky
We could lie
And watch the sun pass by
In the still air
We could stare
And see birds dancing with flare

If we see this breeze seize
Then we did not freeze

And once ice melts
Then the sun, your heart, might be felt

So bear the clouds and cold
Wait till its past, don’t be so easy to fold.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sankaran Ayya 21 January 2012

BLUE SKY WHITE AND COLORFUL BIRDS NICE TO WATCH. IF ICE MELTS SUN SHINES GOOD YOUR POEMS HAVE NICE FLOW OF WORDS AND THOUGHTS, A POETIC MERIT. SUMMER OR WINTER YOU WILL SHINE PL READ MY POEMS AND EXPRESS YOUR VIEWS IN AN ACT OF TRAGEDY AND COMEDY SHAKESPEARE SMILES PLEASE VERIFY ALL THE BEST DEAR JOHN WAKE -KAVIN CHARALAN

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Sankaran Ayya 21 January 2012

BLUE SKY WHITE AND COLORFUL BIRDS NICE TO WATCH. IF ICE MELTS SUN SHINES GOOD YOUR POEMS HAVE NICE FLOW OF WORDS AND THOUGHTS, A POETIC MERIT. SUMMER OR WINTER YOU WILL SHINE PL READ MY POEMS AND EXPRESS YOUR VIEWS IN AN ACT OF TRAGEDY AND COMEDY SHAKESPEARE SMILES PLEASE VERIFY ALL THE BEST DEAR JOHN WAKE -KAVIN CHARALAN

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Binish Cd 24 December 2011

very good attractive words....

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Binish Cd 24 December 2011

very good attractive words....

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