Sunday, June 26, 2011

In Debt Comments

Rating: 5.0

With each passing second
I take a look in the mirror
the lines on my face get clearer
eternal sleep is nearer
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pada kambanji
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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