[IN EARLY WINTER Poem by Jūkichi Yagi

[IN EARLY WINTER

Rating: 3.5


In early winter,
I look down from a roof top garden.
The town of Kobe gives me
a look that is strangely off-putting
yet reminiscent of a streak of undeniable longing.
Only towards the mountain,
is it bright and clear as a fine autumn day.
Is it maybe because I'm looking down from a height?
What a pitiful sight it is with endless smoke rising gracelessly.
The town is evenly
coloured in dull steel blue
and appears disorderly.
I am pierced by an orderly streak of sorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 20 April 2019

The extraordinary simplicity of Jūkichi's poems, a poetic equivalent of naïve paintings, was not so much a hallmark of his literary 'style' as the manifestation of his religious belief that his poetry should serve not literature itself, but God. [Poetry International]

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