Land of odyssey and valley of echo
I hear nothing as it strikes and goes
In the air never to come back
I realize about what can be at stake
We all speak untruth
And pass the ordeal through
As it gives no pleasure
But worries for sure
I understand about human mind
That can not remain kind
Feels jealous of somebody’s rise
As it has sprang sudden surprise
We blame system
But we are part and it stems
From the same root
Where we daily thump our foot
I blame no one
As we are not alone
We almost follow same pattern
And wait for the turn
We follow easy path to pursue
Whether right, wrong or undue
It remains our endeavor always
To achieve the aim in easy way
GOOD Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi9 minutes ago good thinking, well written poem.........
Land of odyssey and valley of echo I hear nothing as it strikes and goes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Some Girl Surprise rises are often well deserved, the battle is often not with others but within ourselves. Yes we all have our own path and our own time, most definitely. What is meant for us does not pass us. A nice write