In Extreme Case... Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

In Extreme Case...

Rating: 5.0


In Extreme Case...

The sail without winds
It only the curtain
For the kitchen...

The sea without waves-
Like big lake, with
Crayfishes ones...

The sweet verses -
Like ice-cream
at the summer sun's...

Calmness no for me,
Give me please winds...
Or the pink breezes,

In extreme case...

Wednesday, February 11, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: pink
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 11 February 2009

Thoughts along a transendental plain Tsira thankyou for the journey 10 +++ Chris

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Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

A very nice similes of poetic words and structure....10+++

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