Monday, June 17, 2013

In Good Faith Comments

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...and when I cried
For the first time
Upon touching the earth
I did it instinctively
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indira babbellapati
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Indira Babbellapati 02 July 2013

from melvina germain: Profound, beautiful and soothing, a wonderful mix of pleasurable words. I so love this poem Indira.....

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Shahzia Batool 19 June 2013

.....yes, very true, sometimes oblivion is the most wanted state ! ! ! ! !

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Valsa George 19 June 2013

Where there's breathing There're tears Where there're tears There's breathing! So very true! Time rolling like a child's marble on a cold marble floor is an arresting image! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 June 2013

Tears and breathing are made inseparable. An observation worth noting. Thanks for the nice poem.

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