A heavy weight pressing down on my shoulders
Head hanging, limp hands, shallow breaths,
Tired eyes that stare at nothing
Numb to touch
Numb to feel
Numb to hope
See, this is better. I can tell you really felt this. This is something that really burdened you to be expressed. For a little punctuation, change the last lines to: Numb to hope
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely poem..well written and quite impressive too 10/10